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Prayer

by *jesusroxgirl

O dear Lord,
help me today
in everything
I do and say.
Help me follow through
on everything
I'm called to do.
And 'though my way
is tough to see,
help me follow
on my knees.
In everything
I say and do,
Lord, help me follow
After You.

Amen
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:iconjameslockdesign:
I like it :) I don't care (and didn't really notice) about the rhythm but the content is beautiful :)

I may print it out and stick it where I'll see it in the mornings :) (as long as you don't mind)
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*jesusroxgirl Nov 19, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh! thank you so much! :D

I wouldn't mind you stickin' it up somewhere :) just as long as credit is still mine in case anyone asks... not to be arrogant or anything, just legal haha

i'm glad you like it ^^ I'm pretty sure this comment just made my day :D

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Trust in the Lord with all your heart and lean not on your own understanding. In all your ways acknowledge him, and he will make your path's straight. ~Proverbs 3:5-6
*Clubs* ~MartialArtsClub777 | =Jesus-loves-You | ~dAWriterStrike
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I liked it so much I have just posted it to our youth groups website.

I have given you credit (of course)

you can find it here: [link]

Please check that you are ok with where and how I have posted it.

James
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*jesusroxgirl Nov 27, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
oh wow! thnx so much! i'm so honored :) all glory to God though ^^ He's the one that gave me the talent and inspiration to write it ^^

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Trust in the Lord with all your heart and lean not on your own understanding. In all your ways acknowledge him, and he will make your path's straight. ~Proverbs 3:5-6
*Clubs* ~MartialArtsClub777 | =Jesus-loves-You | ~dAWriterStrike
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The rhythm started out OK, but there's no follow through.
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*jesusroxgirl Apr 26, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
Ya... this isn't the typical type of poetry i write and it was done in about five seconds, so i can't say that it's one of my best ^^

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Trust in the Lord with all your heart and lean not on your own understanding. In all your ways acknowledge him, and he will make your path's straight. ~Proverbs 3:5-6
*Clubs* ~MartialArtsClub777 | =Jesus-loves-You | ~dAWriterStrike
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